He: Can I borrow your soul for a while
She: Why not, its really not doing anything worthwhile
He: I promise to pamper your soul, in case you miss it so
She: Sure go ahead its your for some time, the devil is gonna be fun for a while
He: Err...if its not a problem, can I take it to another time
She: It depends what you are going to do with it, please ensure it stays and smiles
He: Hey, do you know your soul and I really gel
She: Of course as yours and mine have so much to tell
He: We are going to fly upwards towards the sky. Through the clouds, its heaven with soft cool breeze. Here no human exist
She: My dear please treat my soul well. Its slogged its butt off and now it needs this much required rest
He: Hey, its just the beginning of the sail. Your soul and mine really do gel
She: I hope it told you I like the sea, the waves and the sound water over rough shores
He: Well, we are exploring past life. Beautiful sculptures, old forts, remains of past life is pleasing as hell
She: Hmmm..I like the sound of it. I really think you mean well
He: Its beautiful here. So pretty. So antique
She: Are you talking about the sights or my soul?
He: Your soul is looking straight into my eyes. Its inquisitive. It wants to know.
She: That's me. That's my soul. I always want to know. Dig deep and deeper. Till there is nothing left to know
He: Its your soul. Its doesn't belong to me. I am ready to let go. But know I am one with you.
She: I don't know what to say. Can I have back my soul?
He: You like me. My soul knows
She: I have to think and find the right thing to say.
He: With me, soul has discovered, taught, enjoyed and lived life the hearty way
She: Damn, is this how it is to be softly numb?!!
17 comments:
a deep moment.....intensified with words :)
Juss goofin around with words!: )
words will always remain words.....how u play with them makes all the diference :)
cheeeers
this is too intense
we need to work on a play! u have mad talent and it shows on the blog
U think?! As long as u don't make me write a mushy play,I am cool with it : )
:)
in reference to the last two comments - JOIN ME IN!
Haha.. As long as u don't expect a mushy play. I am all for it. U 2 are the kings of mush and I juss don't do that! ;)
ha ha :)
looks who's talking? :P
n mush? whats that?? lol
i wont tk away any credit from the MAN .... n wud make him the undisputed king of mush instead :)
Hello! I aint no mushy! We will ALL write a happy go lucky play in which the heroine gets the hero. He treats her well and NO one dies!!cool??
beyond my capabilities to deliver something like this .. u carry on ... ill watch it for sure! :)))))
How rude! Hahaha.. So prey enlighten how ur play would go??
My play - it wud definitely go the way i see life .... the way i have experienced it ... what all i think is the truth.
i alwayz thot being RIGHT is a matter of perception ..... but well even TRUTH is one of those!!
read my new post...n ull know what my PLAY wud be like :))
n i wasnt being rude.....hell no...i can never be (n hate myself for that) .... all i wanted was a better scripted n directed play by the masters ... leaving out the lesser being, who wud rather watch it (without asking for a pass and purchasing the ticket!).
:)))
Thank U Lesser Being
U are now granted 'viewing sanctuary'
FREE VIEWS OF OUR MANUSCRIPTS!!
hahahah...thanks to all this banter, softly numb has dissappeared on me : )
Alter ego get together needs to happen for the MAD play!! It will something like "mid summers night" : )
:)
cheers
hmmmmm .. that was a really subtle conversation.. "he" seems to be thoughful about her.. he said everything he had to ...she said alot without saying much .... very nice ...
Words aren't everything, are they?!! Sometimes words don't let you express anything.nothing. Keep visiting A seed for thought.
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